Focus on cause / Focus on effect

Hello guys 🤩 

A pleasure to greet you one more week showing you my practices of the week 🤩 


this week we use clustering to work the practices always reaching the outline.


Topic: Why only a small percentage of people read newspapers today. 

Specific topic: Lack of reading habits.


Prewriting: Clustering

Effect cause easy 





Thesis statement. 

Society is still neglecting the importance of reading, an example of this is that they do not even read the newspaper, this is a cause of lack of reading, also due to technological advances that have supplanted texts on paper, sometimes health problems.


Outline 

Introduction: Educating yourself with reading is very fundamental in life, you must start with a book or any document that attracts attention, currently almost no one has that reading habit as a consequence it brings disinterest as much as for children and young people.

Body

P1: Lack of reading. 

  • Reading is usually boring therefore there are few who read.

  • I do not know how to instill a habit as a child, as a consequence, they do not like to read.

  • Does not read as a result lacks vocabulary.


P2:Technological advance. 

  • It is easier to use the cell phone and it is also faster. 

  • It is preferable to see the news on TV since it is faster.

  • If you don't have time this means that you can listen to the radio and not read.


P3:Health problems.

  • Straining your eyes actually gives you a migraine.

  • Reading a lot causes a headache.

  • A consequence of straining your eyes is that you see blurry.


Conclusion: It is important to have reading habits, but technological advances have created a neglected society to read the newspaper, in my case I do not read the newspaper, I only see news on my cell phone because they do not sell newspapers by my house.


Topic: Airborne Diseases

 Specific topic: COVID-19

 Prewriting: Clustering

Cause- effect 

 

Thesis statement:

 Society is facing and fighting against many diseases worldwide, but the one that is affecting the most and is becoming very visible is COVID-19, which began with a virus that is mandatory to take biosecurity measures, mandatory use of a mask, social distancing, and a vaccine to fight the virus.


 Outline

 Introduction: The air is the first transmitter of the virus, that is why it is obliged to take biosecurity measures, social distancing and vaccinate everything to prevent the spread of the virus.

 Bodysuit

 P1: Biosafety measures.

  •  Using a mask indeed helps to avoid contagion.

  •  Apply gel alcohol on the hands therefore it is necessary to walk it always.

  •  In fact, wearing masks is also to avoid contagion.

 P2: Social distancing.

  •  It is mandatory to have distance because contact with someone else is avoided.

  •  Avoiding crowds is more than not having parties.

  •  Create a cluster of friends with the only ones you can socialize with.

 P3: Vaccine.

  •  Pfizer actually gives you a fever reaction, bone pain.

  •  Modern this is the one that has more reaction than the other two because it is composed of stronger components.

  •  Sinovac in addition to the above symptoms is also given allergy

 Conclusion: for this reason it is very important to continue with biosecurity measures for our well-being, since it is for our good, in the case of my family we all make the decision to get vaccinated because it is a way to avoid contagion a little more .


see you next week guys 🤩


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